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Title: Closet Case
Pairing: NYxLondon
Rating: Quite NC-17
Warnings: Fellatio, Frottage, Bad Language
Summary: Plot? Characterization? Skillful use of the English language? This story has none of those things! It does, however, have lovely boys finding out what happens when you lock yourselves in the closet at the New York Stock Exchange. The 2008 stock market crash, from an entirely new perspective.
Author's Note: Right, so I promised i'd write this forever ago, and here it is! It took me a few days to finish as i'm a little rusty, but I think you'll all like it! Or...I mean whoever decides to read this. *laughs*



11:45am
October 7th, 2008
New York Stock Exchange

There are a thousand voices, sounds, footfalls, organized chaos right outside the door that New York is currently hiding out behind, but he doesn’t care. He can barely hear any of it anyway beyond the furious ringing in his ears, the way his blood is rushing through his veins, making him dizzy and lightheaded. His mind, what’s left of it, is focused on his immediate surroundings, on the feel of the body pressed up against him, of the heat and humidity between them as they slide against one another.

“Will,” New York gasps, feels the scrape of the door between his shoulder blades where he’s roughly pushed against it. His arms are around London’s shoulders, fingers trailing harsh lines down his sides before tugging at his suit jacket until he feels it pop open and can tug it down. But the sleeves gets snagged in the crooks of London’s elbows, and after a few fruitless jerks New York abandons it for the more easily traversed buttons of his shirt.

There isn’t any light in this tiny broom closet (Pine-Sol and glass cleaner and dust, oh my!), and so they’re feeling their way around, mapping out each other’s bodies even though they’ve spent entire days together naked in bed, and on the couch, and in the bathroom, the kitchen, the hallway…

A nipple is exposed to his frustrated wanderings and he brushes the pad of his thumb against it, feels it pebble and harden beneath his ministrations, loving London’s gasp that sends a wave of blistering heat along his skin. Teeth set into New York’s neck in retaliation, canines digging into the soft skin of his throat and holding tight as the older man’s breath hisses through his clenched jaws, almost growling. The sound, heady and lustful, makes every drop of blood in New York’s body gather at that spot to burn, burn, burn.

He wants more, more of that, more of that, and so New York gives the nipple between his fingers a vicious twist, simultaneously tipping his head back further to allow London to mark him up, not caring in the least that he won’t be able to cover the bruises. It wouldn’t be the first time, nor the last, and those fuckers only wish they were getting it this good. And this often. And this hard.

Speaking of hard…

Moans are bubbling in his diaphragm like hot crude, threatening to spill over his lips, but New York holds them fast, knowing there are people walking right outside the door, knowing he has to be discreet and hating it a little. But it’s hard with London’s cock pressing up against his thigh, hard with their legs twisted together and rubbing, getting faster, making it impossible to think, making it impossible to keep it together. New York is so hard it’s painful, and he clings to London’s body for relief, brings their lips together before he can start babbling things that he might later regret.

“You, god, you,” he murmurs between open-mouthed kisses, finally getting London’s shirt open enough that he can run his hands up the other man’s chest, scrape his nails in angry lines down that pale skin, mar it up a little. He revels in the little hitches of breath, the goosebumps that litter London’s skin, the way his lips tremble and shake like he’s freezing cold. Like he’s dying.

“Me?” London replies, pulling away for a moment (lips are so cold without him, they should always be together somehow, always, always) to press a chaste kiss to New York’s cheek. His voice is simpering, made more mischievous by the lack of light; the way the dark space seems completely filled by his baritone, his sweet, sweet voice. “I’m right here, lovely.”

It’s the playful lilt of that endearment that sets him in motion, wrapping London in his arms to reverse their positions and grin at the way the older man’s breath comes out in a satisfying rush when his back slams into the door. New York doesn’t give him even a moment to regain it, diving in instantly with tongue and teeth, taking the nipple that his fingers had discovered earlier and laving it with warm attention. London’s skin is a little salty with sweat, but beneath that lingers the taste of the same Imperial Leather soap that he’d been using since the second World War, of heat and nostalgia, of a hundred haunted dreams.

So many years of waking up just before the best part…

There are sounds now; London is purring between each rattling breath, hands buried in New York’s hair, tugging at it, urging him on, guiding him down where he wants attention. And so down New York goes, onto his knees, wishing he could see London’s expression but consoling himself with the quivering thighs pressed against his spread palms, with the strong hips that thrust involuntarily towards him when he tugs the buttons of London’s pants open, loosens the fly.

“Not a sound,” New York warns, pressing a kiss against the dampened front of the other man’s boxers before drawing his cock out from between the folds of the fabric. They don’t have a lot of time if the growing chatter outside the closet is any indication, but New York is determined to have London undone and wanton, wants to watch him struggle to get himself back together in the aftermath, to see him disheveled on the floor of the stock exchange for everyone to see. New York wants him satiated, to carry that adorable smirk (I got some, aren’t I lucky?”) around all day.

And know he’s entirely responsible for it.

The flesh is full and heavy against his tongue as he slides his lips around it, tasting the bitter smear of pre-come on his palate, drawing it in further to get a better feel for it. To be honest, New York doesn’t have a whole lot of experience with this, but it doesn’t seem to matter. London’s hips are already rolling forward in waxing waves, his legs spreading wide and open, a soft repetitive keening sound shattering the silence (getting louder, so sexy, getting desperate) with each bob of New York’s head. Eventually, in an effort to maintain their secrecy, he reaches up and sharply slaps London’s inner thigh, digging fingers in and leaving little half-moons in his skin.

Fuck!” There’s a thud as the back of London’s head smacks into the door.

New York pulls away reluctantly. Just for a moment. He feels empty suddenly, like London belongs in his mouth, like he fits. He wants him back there. Wants to wrap every part of him in his arms and never let go, dragging his mouth over every inch of skin until London is a sobbing mass of want, of surrender. But they don’t have time for that…no time for the sweet romance New York would adamantly deny he loved. But later. Definitely later.

“Quiet! It was your rule, not mine.” He darts forward in the dark, nibbles along the hipbone he finds in his blind exploration. “If I had my way you’d be hollering.”

“No, no…m’sorry. More, Anthony, so good,” London mumbles brokenly, his voice creamy and thick and shaking. His entire body is shaking. The hands that fumble for the back of New York’s head, urging it to his cock, the knee that comes up awkwardly to rest on his shoulder despite the pants falling around his thighs, the belly that contracts and expands with each change of New York’s mouth and tongue and cheeks and lips.

If New York had reached into London’s chest, touched fingers to his beating heart, cupped it in his palm, he probably would have found it shaking, shuddering, fit to burst…

The desperate scrape of London’s fingernails against the wood of the door, a testament to his impending climax, brings New York back to himself, back into the feel of his mouth sliding along hard flesh, to the obscene sounds of suction and saliva, to the smell of sex and sweat and London. Always London. There’s never really been anyone else despite his attempts to fool himself otherwise.

London is fighting for every breath now, spasmodic and writhing uncontrollably, his hips thrusting in time with New York, while his hands, ever gentle, pet New York’s hair like a precious thing, affectionate even in these final moments.

God, he loves this part. The part where he feels London fall to pieces, where New York can practically hear the cogs grinding to a screeching halt, where the world shatters and comes back together in a matter of seconds. London’s knee is tightening almost painfully across his shoulder now, the heel of his sensible dress shoe digging into his back. Every muscle in London’s body is thrumming and tense. Ready. Taut like a violin string ready to snap. New York can almost picture the older man’s toes curling in his shoes.

“Just like that, just like that,” London whispers, mantra-like, mindless, affected, and beautiful. “Lovely, lovely…”

It happens suddenly, like the crack of a whip. The half-shouted, almost surprised, cry of his name that is cut off by London slapping a hand over his own mouth seconds before New York’s mouth is awash with warm spend. He takes as much as he can, feeling a bit of the liquid burst from the corner of his lips to trail down his cheek and drip off his chin as he tries to milk more orgasm from the flesh pulsing in his mouth, from the quivering body held down by his palms.

When he finally pulls away, resting his forehead against London’s thigh to catch his breath, he’s startled to discover that somewhere in the chaos every muscle in his body has become tingly and numb…except his cock. And that is very much alive, twitching, pounding rhythmically, making his mind fuzzy, unable to concentrate on his lover’s afterglow, unable to do anything other than moan pathetically in the hopes that London will pick up on his signals and give him what he needs.

Because he’s pretty damn sure that if he doesn’t get it within the next five minutes, he’ll explode in a mass of sticky goo. Or he’ll have blue balls for the rest of his life. It’s that bad.

“Mmm, let me take care of you,” London’s voice, his accent thick and slurred, slices through the darkness, sending a shot of desire straight to New York’s belly where it simmers and boils. He’s shaking violently (no longer numb, burning again, sizzling) when London draws him to his feet so that he can hike New York’s thigh up a bit, hands drifting downward to cup at his ass, pull him up London’s thigh, give him friction and pressure.

So good, so good…

New York lets out an uninhibited moan at the contact, circling his arms tightly around London’s neck and holding on for dear life as they start the dance. It isn’t going to take long, that much New York knows, and he squeezes both his thighs around the one in-between them, instinctively falling into the pace that London is setting. Somewhere in the back of his mind he knows he’s going to make a mess of himself, coming in his pants this way, but he can’t bring himself to care. Because London is right there, massaging his ass, grinding against him steadily, getting faster by the second, and everything is short-circuiting. He feels liquid and hot and sticky, and as the first trails of pre-come begin rolling down his cock to catch in his pubic hair, as the first shudders begin to wrack his frame, he knows he’s already done for.

“Wish I could see you,” London whispers huskily in his ear, ruts into him harder, and New York is seeing stars behind his closed eyelids. Getting so close, god he aches. “I love watching you get off. You’re probably making that adorable face where you scrunch up your nose.”

“Shut…up,” New York retorts breathily, any further words being cut off by an almost painful gasp as fingernails dig into the curve of his ass, scratching along the fabric of his pants and getting him into a more solid grip. Distantly, through the buzzing in his ears, he hears London’s shoulders straining backwards, grating against the door, giving him more leverage to slide New York along his leg with increasing urgency, to bring New York to completion. They’re both panting now, frantically filling the tiny closet with noise, oblivious to anything that may be going on around them, whether they’ve been caught or whether they might be interrupted.

New York would let London finish him in the middle of the trading floor with a thousand people watching at this point.

“That’s it, Anthony, that’s it,” London coos to him, sweetly encouraging despite the fact that New York hardly needs any encouragement. The words make him feel warm though, and the tone makes him feel special. It creates the sort of shivers that have nothing to do with the climax quickly gathering speed within him.

It’s that emotion he’s wanted for centuries. They could never touch again, but as long as he had that feeling to tuck away …

Lolling his head to the side, he feels telltale tremors blossoming in his belly, working their way up his body as London’s lips attach to the skin of his throat, when his teeth snap down. New York’s eyes widen at the sudden shock of pain, and he feels the rush of orgasm smash over him like a tidal wave, wash up his spine, set every muscle into mindless contractions, wipe his mind clear, and send a torrential flood of words he would never normally say pouring from between open lips.

Long moments pass as he relearns how to breath, as he calms the furious pounding of his blood, attempting to find the pieces of his shattered consciousness and place them back together into a functioning whole. In the meantime though, he allows himself to sag against London’s body, to luxuriate in the feel of long fingers running soothingly through his hair, to bask in the breathless proclamations of adoration whispered into his skin, to lose himself in the beating of London’s heart under his ear where he rests, satiated, insanely happy.

Wrapping arms around London’s middle, he gives him a tender hug, refusing to acknowledge the fact that he’s cuddling standing up. But reality is quickly setting in, and he can feel the sticky, uncomfortable evidence of their coupling gumming up his boxers, can smell the sweat drying into an itchy smear, can hear London’s heartbeat becoming almost deafening loud against his cheek, growing louder every second, louder and…wait a minute…louder…?

“--out of there, right now! You hear me, young man?! Right now!”

Oh shit! Is that Dad?!

“They’ve been banging on the door for the better part of five minutes, I’d say,” London chuckles, his voice amused, though there’s an underlying edge of annoyance in his tone. New York grits his teeth, listens more closely to the voices outside. They are in so much shit. “I suppose we’d best clean up a bit and open the door, hmm?”

“Fuuuuck.” New York rolls his eyes, stepping back from London (he misses the heat instantly, he misses the curve of their bodies pressed together) to arrange his clothes the best he can manage in the dark. He can hear London zipping up his pants, messing around with his shirt, cursing a few times when he can’t get himself situated as well as he might like. Well…at least he didn’t have to deal with what was probably a massive wet spot on the front of his pants! New York’s face was already burning and he hadn’t even stepped foot outside the door yet.

“London! New York! I know you can hear me! Out! Now!”

“Just a minute! We’re coming!” New York yells back, fumbling around in the dark for London and clumsily drawing their mouths together. Just one more kiss before they go, just one more intimate touch. The kiss is sweet, barely more than a brushing of lips, but it’s enough to fortify him for what he imagines is going to be a very unpleasant few hours.

Then New York quickly grabs the door handle before he can second guess himself and hide out in the broom closet until everyone has gone home for the night.

“That’s the problem, boy.” England stands, arms crossed and looking menacing as the door opens. New York squints and blinks rapidly into the bright overhead lights, looking at America who is resolutely looking anywhere but New York’s pants, or neck, or disheveled hair. Pretty much just not looking at New York at all.

New York can’t say as he blames him…

“Problem?” London says, coming around from behind, giving the small of New York’s back a reassuring pat as he moves to stand in front of him slightly, hiding him from view. “I hardly think the stock exchange is going to fall to pieces while we’re…otherwise occupied.”

“You think so, do you?” England growls and grabs them both by the scruff of their necks, marching them down the hallway towards the jumble and chaos that is the stock exchange trading floor. He pauses in the large doorway, letting go of them only long enough to point up at the flashing boards on the wall, at the stocks prices scrolling across the digital screens in swift succession.

A swift succession of losses. Immense losses. Nearly the entire board, from top to bottom is registering a huge loss.

New York gapes, wide-eyed, and nervously glances over at London who is likewise gaping, and for one of the few times in his life…has no clue what to say. Now that his body is calm and his mind is clear, he can feel it. He can feel the tension in the room, the anxieties as livelihoods drip away, as savings that took a lifetime to build crack and crumble. He can feel it, and doesn’t know what to say.

Shit. Shit. Shit.

“Well? What do you have to say for yourselves?!” England shouts, shaking them both roughly.

Finally, taking a deep breath, New York grins cockily and puts his hands in his jacket pockets. “If I said it was all Iceland’s fault, would you believe me?”

And as England begins sputtering, America begins sighing, and London begins laughing uncontrollably, New York can’t help but think that things are going to be fine. Just another bump in the road. After all, optimism is in his blood, part of his soul. Things always tend to move along exactly as they should, and he always comes out on top.

Though…he really could use a clean pair of pants. The middle-aged woman who constantly flirts with him (and wears too much makeup) is snickering behind her hand, and he’s pretty sure she just took a picture of him with her camera phone.

Just another day and it isn’t time for lunch yet.

Ah, well…così è la vita.

Fin!



Note:
1: New York jokingly blames the stock market crash on the Icelandic Financial Crisis.




Well, there it is! The smut I promised! Wist, this means you're honor-bound to continue the story! *laugh* I have a few chores to take care of and then i'll be around again. Talk with you later!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXX

Cherry!

Date: 2011-01-12 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wisteria02.livejournal.com
Yyyyyyyyeeeeeeesssssss!!!

This really makes my day! Thank youu!

Date: 2011-01-12 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
I'm glad it made you happy! Now its up to you to continue the smut! I think we should totally keep this trend up! More porn is always a good thing!

Date: 2011-01-12 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wisteria02.livejournal.com
It wouldn’t be the first time, nor the last, and those fuckers only wish they were getting it this good. And this often. And this hard.


*dies from nosebleed*

I've just re-read it again. (Yes thrice now! XD) Y-you... *speechless*

ILU!!! <3

I bet Aeld would LOVE this!!!

And yes, I already have ideas for the continuation. Mwahahahaha!

Date: 2011-01-12 11:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
I thought it turned out pretty well myself! I particularly liked New York's part where he gets to take a ride on London's thigh. For some reason that came out very easily.

Continuation! I await it with baited breath!

And yep, I think Aeld will enjoy it.

Date: 2011-01-12 11:25 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-13 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aeld.livejournal.com
I havent even read it read. I just skimmed down to read "HE TAKES A RIDE ON LONDON'S THIGH"


o____________o

i wanna draw that so bad
YAY GOING BACK UP TO READ NAO :O

Date: 2011-01-13 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
i wanna draw that so bad

And I want you to draw it. LIKE WHOA. I would actually fall over dead if *any* of this story was ever illustrated. I mean...YEEEEEEAH.

Let me know how you like it! I thought it turned out preeeetttyyy well, myself. :)

Date: 2011-01-13 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wisteria02.livejournal.com
Yay! Go Aeld draw it! Draw eeetttt!!! *is high from a box of chocolates*

*rereads the story again* <3

Date: 2011-01-13 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aeld.livejournal.com
Ah...A....@_@

CANNON. ALL THIS IS FUCKING CANNON
IMMEDIATE CANNON >0<

I want you to take over Badin' instead of me. This was FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFucking AMAZING! I havent read fanfiction in years and now i've started this daft little comic and and...@_@
FFFFFFFFFFT its a good job im in a booth on the 6th floor next to the dusty war-lists where no-one ever goes because I COULD FEEL MY FACE GO BRIGHT PINK THATS ENTIRE TIME.

I dont think I blinked once.
Oh my darling. Imperial Leather!! Wartime memories! Nose wrinkling!! Now that part is actually cannon and you're very clever to have spotted it And the way they are around each other <3 you've got it spot-freakin-on

You've made me think otherwise about a chapter I cut from the script yesterday, I thought Badin was getting too long and I cut a whole day and night out, BUT NOW I'M FUCKING PUTTING IT BACK IN.

Way to raise the bar! Please write a book =3= On anything really, on spanners, i'd buy it xxx

Date: 2011-01-13 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
I can't take over Badin'! I can't draw!! I can only write. And you're doing fine on the plot all by yourself, trust me.

*BLUSH* I'm glad no one could see you read this, because it is a little porny. Now i'm going to have to write a fic with actual penetration or something. *giggle*

Yeah, I had to ask someone what kind of soap is popular/nostalgic for men over there. She mentioned Imperial Leather and it just so happens that it was around in the second World War. PRETTY MUCH PERFECT RIGHT?

And WEE! I'm glad you're going to leave them in. Surely the boys deserve a nice storyline on their way to true luffs. *laugh*

I promise, someday I will finish my book and I will send you a copy. *smile*

Date: 2011-01-13 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aeld.livejournal.com
My step-dad and mum still use Imperial Leather =^= You're so clever! It IS a really old brand...I cant stand it its really old-fashioned!

*wants to draw the whole thiiiiiiiiiiing But i cant i cant i cant...i must get on.

*snogs brutally*
<3

Date: 2011-01-13 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
Noooo, you mustn't draw the whole thing! Besides, most of it is in the dark anyway. *giggle*

But hey, my birthday is coming up in two weeks here! LMAO Kidding. Kidding.

Date: 2011-01-13 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wisteria02.livejournal.com
Your birthday is coming up in two weeks?? When? Mine too. xD

Date: 2011-01-13 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
Mine's on the 31st. When's your's? *cocks head*

Date: 2011-01-13 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wisteria02.livejournal.com


28th... Hah! I have enough time to prepare! (OO,) any requests for a fic as a gift? (@_@ it's the only thing I can give, aside from my undying fangirl-ness)

Date: 2011-01-13 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
*giggle*

Well...gee...I dunno! I'd really just love to see the continuation of that fic I just wrote. I'm really looking forward to it! Though if you want to be specific you could write the boys as like...laying in bed on Sunday morning kind of bantering. That might be nice!

Do you want anything? I'm a slow writer, but I could get it in time for your birthday! :)

Date: 2011-01-13 11:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wisteria02.livejournal.com
xD jackpot!!! I already have one in my docs folder. Not finished yet though, and it was set late at night, but that can be changed.

xD er, request? Hmm... Ah! I know! I want fic in the Mermaid!London universe. (But Daddy I love him!)xD if that's okay...

Don't worry about the continuation, I'll be done before our birthdays!

Date: 2011-01-14 12:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
Well, early in the morning when it's still dark would be awesome. Either when they've been up all night or they woke up early. I kind of like the idea of them joking about being exhausted at 4am and yet still aren't going to sleep.

And woooow...mermaid fic! It's probably going to be pretty introspective. I don't know that I can manage anything else for that! LOL

Date: 2011-01-14 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wisteria02.livejournal.com
xD Remember when you were down because of London's *cough* insensitivity in Badin'6? Aeld gave us a link to one of her crack LDNxNY with Arthur?

It's here - http://community.livejournal.com/hetalia/8875661.html

(*¬*) and yes, early morning post-shenanigans would definitely be lovely. Would you mind if it was like, really sappy too? xD

Date: 2011-01-14 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
Oh wow...lmao! I can manage that I think! LOL.

And you're asking me if I like SAP?? I love sap, dude. You've seen the shit I write, haven't you? What I write is what I like. As long as they're not "Noooo, I love youuu more" i'm all good. I try to keep them guys and not turn them into chicks. LOL.

Date: 2011-01-14 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wisteria02.livejournal.com
xD You infected me with your sappiness actually. I had never written sap before, the continuation to your New Year's fic was my first...

I hate chickification too. O_O Both London and NY are badasses! Rough and ready or cool and refined *coughstuffycough*, they're both MEN. It wouldn't be yaoi for me otherwise.

Date: 2011-01-14 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
LOL. Well, I tend to be a fan of the fluffs. I can't help it! I like to be happy and fluffies make me happy!

I try really hard to let any sappy thoughts in yaoi fic remain in their head. I can't imagine NY just waxing on poetic about being in love, though i can imagine him admitting it and being embarrassed by it. But yeah, they're MEN. And as men I fully expect them to act like MEN.

Date: 2011-01-14 12:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wisteria02.livejournal.com
Oh, but SOME real men are extreme saps too. xD I personally know one or two.

Hmm... I can imagine London being shameless about being in love though. xD He seems to be the type who, despite being dense, once he makes up his mind, can embrace it wholeheartedly. Plus your "girly-ass-shampoo" is stuck in my head canon for him.

Date: 2011-01-14 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
Oh well yeah, London's a romantic, so that fits. Poor NY...not so much. Though he's still a romantic person! I mean, I can't imagine a more romantic place to spend Christmas that NYC. It sounds so sweet and adorable.

Date: 2011-01-14 01:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wisteria02.livejournal.com
xD A romantic tough guy who hides it all with bluff and swagger. Who gets disconcerted whenever London does something tooth-rottingly sweet and reciprocates with awkward tokens of affection that are heartbreakingly more genuine than anything London's poets can come up with. <3

*cue in the snark* and then we get their usual relationship. xD

Wow. I kinda wish Aeld was also online. But it's already 1am here.

Date: 2011-01-14 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
lmao! Do you have an AIM name? Granted I know its 1am where you are (Emma just went to sleep like a half hour ago) but in case you want to chat sometime and don't have anyone around! :)

Date: 2011-01-14 01:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wisteria02.livejournal.com
xD

AshlarKithkanan is my AIM name. I just created it the other night for the purpose of communicating with my beta. So... I only have one buddy as of the moment. T_T

Add me?

Date: 2011-01-13 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elapsedspiral.livejournal.com
>: "someone", hmpf, I'm the cat's blumming mother now.

Date: 2011-01-18 05:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aeld.livejournal.com
FANART OF THIS 8O
o yes.
oooo yes.

Date: 2011-01-19 07:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orangepencils.livejournal.com
GOODNESS; LOVELY LOVELY WOW!
loooooooooooved this! loved the way you wrote it. and the ending was just so perfect!

Date: 2011-01-19 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
*blink*

Oh wow, someone actually commented on this! *squee* That makes me super happy! I know people have read it. I had started to think that maybe it wasn't as good as I'd thought it was.

Anyway!

I liked writing it in present tense. I thought it made it seem more "there" if you get what I mean. I'm really glad you liked it! :)

Date: 2011-01-19 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orangepencils.livejournal.com
Yeah! The whole present tense aspect of it just made it feel as though it was now and there. not then and whenever XD.

Date: 2011-01-23 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meridianvase.livejournal.com
Oh my. Just started reading NY/LDN fanfiction today and I am liking it more than I would like to admit. This is like, volcanic levels of hotness. And I am always a fan of present tense in situations like these. xD You win my adoration, mon amie, I wish I could write this deliciously.

Date: 2011-01-23 11:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
Well, you will quickly run out of fanfiction since there's....not much! But i'm interested in writing more (as in, on my coming days off work, heh) so you'll have a bit more shortly, I suppose.

I'm really glad you like the present tense! I've only recently switched to using that perspective and I'm finding my writing style loves me for it.

*hugs* Thanks for reviewing it! *purr*

Date: 2011-02-24 08:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juliet-ros.livejournal.com
I'm a recluse who does not comment half as much as she should. I've read this thing so many times I thought I had commented on this piece, but apparently not. Sorry, I do love it, really! ^^;;

Date: 2011-02-24 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] conjure-lass.livejournal.com
Awwwww, thank you! It's actually really nice to have people comment on the NYxLondon pieces since they're so outside normal fandom.

I'm actually working on another one! Hopefully you'll enjoy that one as much as this one.

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